TheBoogley's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[the angel benny]

Nice Work

I like this, it tells a story, it's simple, and everything moves quite well.

[Stick and Stick Episode 2]

Come up with an Idea first

Here's the best bit of advice I can offer you. Come up with an idea first, then start drawing. Stick figures can be awsome, their not the problem. The problem is you have two characters looking at each other saying, "what do you wanna do?", "I don't know what do you wanna do?" I think if you get an idea of some sort then get stuck in you cant go wrong!

Lost-Wisdom responds:

At least it was better than episode 1, but yeah, your generally right. I'll get a better idea next episode.

[Stick and Stick Episode 1]

Put in some more time

This is it's current state is hard to watch, I reckon you should spend time on smoothing things out so we can follow the action, maybe lower the frame rate. Crusty stick figures and ideas off the top of your head are great, it seems like something pis funny i around the corner...

Lost-Wisdom responds:

Yeah, I know what you mean. I just noticed too that my frame rate was a bit too high. I guess I'll lower it to 15 fps.

Thanks for the review.